Dear Rebekah Blackwolf,

The debate over "fishing is cruel" is one that has circulated in the media for some time now, and continues to attract a wide variety of strong responses, both for and against. Recently, there has been much coverage and discussion about "fishing is cruel", that has elicited an emphatic response from you, and you argue that "fishing is cruel" has a negative impact on fishers. Your piece uses many different persuasive techniques in order to convey your opinion, including rhetorical questions and inclusive language. There is also an accompanying visual which serves to strengthen the author's argument.
From Mr Charkleman

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